x.1 学术讨论题day1
9min, 人 + 机器批改
逻辑相关 + 具有很多细节
虽然逻辑如此,但是解释需要有细节或者逻辑链
题目有70%是二选一观点,30%是what题;
我们首先读P的title,一般二选一的话P会直接给出两个TS,而下面的内容都是围绕这两个TS进一步用理由阐述;再往下 读取S的TS中心句 + 理由;两个S必然是相互反对的;
我们从二选一当中选择自己的topic,我们再从理由中选一个自己好写的;再想一个自己的理由;
下面的反面论证如果时间不够可以不写;
while I can see P's point of view that[对方的理由+TS], I agress with Mike's perspective that [选择的TS]。 As mentioned by Mike, [理由1]. [理由1的解释(一个复杂句,充满细节), 30-35字]正面解释; however, 反面论证....Apart from what Mike has raised, I would add that [理由2][理由2的解释,语言书面一点,用第三人称]正面解释; on the contrary, 反面论证...Therefore, TS的正确性ethical and beneficial for consumer
理由的解释的话有两种,逻辑链和举例;
- 逻辑链
逻辑推导
- 例子解释
For example, My uncle David Wang, a photographer, are keen on buying what he needs using TikTok, for this software will always give him what he wants such as lens and and photography course, which is really convenient and he can choose whatever he needs; however, without software aimed at consumer interests, he will overwhelmed with information such as language courses or furniture when advertisements are not targeted but are the laws of privacy.
x.1.2 例子2
while I can see Claire's point that green spaces should be creatively introduced and created on the rooftops of existing buildings, I agree with Kelly's perspective that it is more essential to use available land for other commercial and residential purposes. As mentioned by Kelly, hospitals or clinics, places for medical care, are supposed to be constructed on available land. With the walking distance to medical care centers, all citizens, particularly the elderly and the nearby, will allocate less time to their regular appointments and receive meticulous treatment handily in emergency situations; however, such convenience and the peace of mind, generated by having medical care within reach, can not be achieved with a park or natural scenery nearby. Apart from what Kelly has raised, I add that the available land should be utilized for constructing residential houses. With more space to live in, residents will spend less money to rent or by appartment and they will have more time to enjoy solitude, sharing a quality time with families and cooking homemade cuisines, which enhances happiness and wellbeing; on the contrary, people distribute relatitvely less time to visiting parks than the time people are at home.Therefore, more significant buildings, undoubtedly, should be established at spare area, which would maximize the citizen's benefits.
x.2 综合写作题day2
听力一定是在反驳阅读中的内容,我们需要记录听力中的名词,多记对比名词,记好笔记
我们的阅读一定分为四个段落,总分,第一段总(最重要是最后一句),下面三个段落平行(小标题很重要)。
阅读花的时间的是3分钟,我们在3分钟内阅读且记录笔记如下,
开头段肯定是反驳,我们只需要记录是男是女,从“first”开始再认真听,其中first中如果提到阅读的则一律不记录,只记录单单听力中的内容,
最重要的就是名词敏感度和写作的时候要把听力的名词全写下来,
x.2.1 真题训练
阅读部分每一小节只记录1-3个关键性名词;
记录阅读笔记如下,
听力的时候需要记录5个名词;
x.3 学术讨论题day3
语法,搭配,单词拼写都是错误,要尽量避免;
要用各种各样的句式,使用句子多样性;丰富句式:3+3’
改变主语:
变化主语如下,案例如下,
Doing exercise, students can improve their health.
知道完更改句式,我们再看看案例如下,
while I can see Sara's point that the environment, the only place citizens live in, is fundamental to people's survival, I agree with Taehyun's perspective that investing in education will bring long-term benefits.As mentioned by Taehyun, thanks to advanced scientific and technological development, current environmental problems can be addressed. For example, in order to tackling air pollution, educated people can promote electric or hybrid vehicles, invent high-tech equipment to purify exhausts from manufacturing plants, and research approaches to grow more plants on less available land; however, complicated and complex environment problems cannot be solved without the support from the government, when the authority only focuses on current and superficial environment problems.Apart from what Taehyun has raised, I add that when allocating resources to education, the authority prevents the environment from being deteriorated further. It is well-known that well-educated students or residents will raise their awareness of protecting our only planet, and take measures of sustainability, such as conserving, choosing sustainable goods and following the conduct of "reducing, reusing and recycling", which will prevent potential problems in advance; on the contrary, just dealing with environmental issues, the officials cannot guarantee that more problems will not emerge. Therefore, it is undoubted that education should be the priority of the authority over environmental protection.
语法突破,点句成金,多做作业;不确定的就不写;
真题2,案例如下,
从上可见,我们可以看见我们选择题分为两类,a. 二选一 b. 一个最好,其他的不如(选择唯一best);
a. stay + b. efficient
While I can see the point of Andrew that a company should focus on other priorities or fields over employee training, I agree with Kelly's perscpective that investing in continuous employee training is the most essential and significant for an organization. As mentioned by Kelly, with professional training offered, employees can maintain a stronger bond with their superiors. It is beneficial for employees to be trained regularly and frequently, who will feel respected and valued, become motivated towards a business's goals, and enjoy a positive workplace atmosphere, allowing employees to work longer time; however, when not being educated or trained, even the most outstanding and skilled staff members choose to leave since they are unsupported and disesteemed.Apart from what Kelly has raised, I add that participating in training programs, employees boost their work efficiency. By intensively cultivated, employees, more versed in their work, are able to acquire computer techniques, time management ability, and work-related expertise, all of which could create profits for corporations; on the contrary, it is well-known that companies will allocate a plethora of time and money to hire the most expert or professional employees, which, undoubtedly, decreases companies revenues. Therefore, continuous professional development, without doubt, is the most vital investment for organizations.
x.4 学术讨论题day4
听力高分与否取决于听力句子的还原度;
我们主要需要还原的是听力和阅读之间的对比,
综合写作的结构如下,
而在写作的时候我们要保证句式多变,主要包括三大和四小,
信息多则用三大从句如下,
信息小则用四小结构如下,
除此之外搭配也很重要,
而整个文章的内容需要写到185字以上;阅读的内容可以抄,但是不能连着5个词抄;
案例如下,
she
x.4.1 真题训练
做笔记如下,记录吃的动物主要是什么,以及为什么做出这样的推断,
听完听力后,记录笔记如下,
需要注意的是副词连接两个句子需要用分号,
用连词连接两个句子则用逗号,
参考的部分如下,时态参照阅读中的主要使用的时态(如果主要时态是过去时则使用过去时),
主题 is the focus of both the writer and the professor. In the writing, three 三 个 TS 的所属类别,[including A, B and C], have been elaborated. The professor, however, claims that all such assumptions are incorrect.As opposed to the writer's idea that 阅读的 TS1, the professor states that 听 力 的 TS1. [Citing the instance of 例 子 名 称],he advances the theory by saying that 听力的细节 .The professor continues to discredit the writing's assertion that 阅 读的 TS2, by examining the fact that 听力的 TS2. In detail, he / she points that 听力的细节.It is the professor's third argument that 听 力 的 TS3, which contradicts the view of the writer that 阅读的 TS3. To explore deeper, the professor contends that 听力的细节.An apparent divide exists between the writer and the professor on 主题 .
我们将听力阅读内容整理后得到如下,
What the short-faced bears, huge North American bears, ate is the
focus of both the writer and the professor. In the writing, three
theories, including feeding on mammals, eating fast-running
animals and being scavengers, have been elaborated. The professor,
however, claims that all such assumptions are incorrect.As opposed to the writer's idea that short-faced bears ate large mammals such as buffalo and mammoth, the professor states that they were not strong enough to beat these large mammals. She
advances the theory by saying that according to their skeleton, they
had thin bones, which means their front legs and paws were weak despite = in spite of + their great sizes.The professor continues to discredit the writing's assertion that fast-running animals were their food, such as deer and antelope, by examining the fact that they were too heavy to catch them without slowing down / they could not catch by taking turns during high
speed. In detail, she points that deer and antelopes did not run in
straight line but they take sharp turns and change directions; however, it was difficult for short-face bears to change directions
without slowing down when they were in high speed.It is the professor's third argument that short-faced bears did not have the features / characteristics of scavengers, which contradicts the view of the writer that they were scavengers. To explore deeper, the professor contends that scavengers usually chewed bones of some partially-eaten / bones animals, leaving distinct marks on their
teeth, but such marks were not found.An apparent divide exists between the writer and the professor on
the diet of short-faced bears.
x.5 学术讨论题day5
学术讨论题从下面三个方向提分:结构,句式,词汇;
词汇选择要地道,准确,搭配;
首先我们要考虑地道的搭配
例如一个常见的固定搭配如下,
那如何做到地道准确呢,就是背诵“信手拈词”,
虽然最重要的是搭配的地道性,但是更重要的是多样性,即使用各种各样的搭配和同义单词替换,
加戏就是加adj或者adv,
案例如下,在下面这个案例中,我们并不是回答二选一,而是做的是回答what题,
what题目更重要的是,两个人都给的是分TS,我们需要在分的基础上总结出总Title,再想出另外一个分TS;
在what题的对比中,我们往往是跟自己写的进行对比,而不是和另外一个同学的内容进行对比(二选一题目中是和另外一个同学进行对比);
While I can see Claire's point that financial support will attract people to reside in rural areas, I agree with Kelly's perspective that boosting infrastructure will draw more populations to countryside.As mentioned by Kelly, with business on entertainment nearby, residents will consider moving there.Comprehensive shopping centers, high-tech cinemas and fancy restaurants, undoubtedly, are appealing to youngsters, who will, without hesitation, choosed to live in a place filled with these facilities, even in the countryside; however, the rural area, even with attractive view and splendid farmland, cannot fascinate young people leading a modern lifestyle.Apart from what Kelly mentions, I add that in order to attrat more residents, public welfare should be accessible and approachable for rural dwellers.It is well-acknowledged that a prominent and decisive in the attractiveness to people is a place's accessibility to public buildings, such as well-equipped hospitals and public sevices; on the countrary, when finding it tiring to get cured in a clinic or take a public transport, people will be hesitated to move to rural regions. Therefore, it is undoubted that infrastructure is significant and essential in countryside's attractiveness.
我们也可以看看老师的全部笔记,
阅读题目后发现不是二选一,而是一个选择判断对错,
a. traditional ways b. harm to health.While I can see Kelly's point of view that educational computer games boost children's learning about math or reading, I agree with Andrew's perspective that it is unnecessary and even unsuitable for kids to play these computer games. As mentioned by Andrew, with the skills of computer games developed in traditional ways, children will maximize their benefits. For example, for the purpose of getting children familiar with mathematics early and easily, playing with Lego, counting items and listening to nursery rhythms are beneficial to building up children's sense of numbers and logic; however, such a rich and comprehensive learning experience is not available and accessible in educational video games, where only a limited number of math skills are taught.Apart from what Andrew has mentioned, I add that spending too much time on computer games is harmful and detrimental to children's health. It is well-acknowleged that playing computer games, children will keep a sedentary lifestyle, have low motivation to socialize and even develop violent behaviors, which causes negative influence on children's health; on the contrary, when not sitting in front of computers, children are more likely to play outdoors and interact with their peers, being conducive to their education. Therefore, children aged 2 to 8, without argument, should be prevented from video games.